高一英语写作指导

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　　高一我们写英语作文时，对于它的选择情景与内容都要进行分析。下面是学习啦小编给大家整理的高一英语写作指导，供大家参阅!

　　高一英语写作指导：如何提升句子

　　I. 讨论下面习作并对比两篇范文：

　　请根据以下的情景说明, 使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。标题为 My English Learning

　　【情景说明】

　　我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取早日掌握这门语言。

　　范文1 My English Learning

　　①I have been learning English for over 6 years. ②I have made some progress in my English. ③But I always feel English is hard to learn, especially some English idioms are difficult. ④I will work hard at this useful foreign language. ⑤I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.

　　范文2 My English Learning

　　① It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.

　　III. Here are 3 ways to make sentences:

　　A. 巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：

　　1)借助名词短语做同位语

　　如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生;籍贯：广东。

　　Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.

　　2)借助介词短语做定语

　　如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。

　　Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.

　　3)借助介词短语做状语

　　如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。

　　With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.

　　4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语

　　如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。

　　They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.

　　B. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：

　　如：他给我钱，我不要。

　　He gave me a lot money but I refused.

　　如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。

　　I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.

　　C. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：

　　2) 定语从句

　　如：中国，地处亚洲东部;特点：地大物博、人口众多。

　　China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.

　　3) 状语从句

　　如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。

　　I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.

　　高一英语写作指导

　　【写作情景】假若你是某高中学生李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式与初中有很大的不同。你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。请你根据下面的提示补全此信。

　　【写作内容】

　　1. 开始学习高中英语时，觉得学习英语有很多困难，难得让他几乎丧失信心;

　　2. 后来逐渐意识到英语的重要性;

　　3. 每天努力学习英语，例如多读书，多背诵英语课文等;

　　4. 向老师和同学请教更好的学习英语的方法;

　　5. 他们的帮助和您的鼓励使我取得了很大的进步，现在对英语越来越感兴趣。

　　【写作要求】字数在100字左右。

　　参考词汇：背诵：recite 高级的: senior

　　Dear Mr. Li,

　　I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student.

　　__________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

　　Wish you all the best.

　　Yours, Li Hua Dear Mr. Li,

　　I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student. When I started to learn senior English in the beginning, I had much difficulty in learning English. I found it so difficult that I almost lost heart. Later, I gradually realized the importance of English, as a result, I worked hard every day, such as reading and reciting English texts as often as possible. I also went to ask my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encouragement that help me make great progress in my English. And now I’m getting more and more interested in it.

　　Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

　　Wish you all the best.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua 基础写作(共15分)

　　请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文，简单描述一下1923年发生在日本的地震。

　　1. 地震于1923年发生在日本横滨市(Yokohama);

　　2. 当时人们正在睡觉，并不知道地震发生;

　　3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌，水电供应中断;

　　4. 有140,000多人丧生，还有很多受伤者和无家可归者;

　　5. 是历史上最严重的地震之一。

　　要求：

　　1. 短文必须包括要点中的所有内容;

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯;

　　3. 词数：100左右。

　　(One possible version)

　　In 1923, a big earthquake hit/struck/occurred in/happened in/took place in the city of Yokohama, a city in Japan. It happened at night when most people were sleeping. When the earthquake happened/ occurred /took place, it seemed that the world was at an end. Houses and tall buildings fell down. Water and electricity were cut off. There were fires and smoke everywhere. In a few seconds the whole city was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached more than 140,000. Besides, a large number of people were injured and lost their homes. It was one of the biggest earthquakes in history.

　　写作(25分)

　　按照中文大意写成语言规范,前后连贯的文章：

　　汶川过去是一个不知名的小城市，它距离成都159公里。就在2008年5月

　　12日约下午两点半，汶川发生了一次强烈地震。许多房屋倒塌，成千上万的人无家可归。一些老师和家长为了救孩子牺牲了。全国都关心汶川，送来了救援人员。人们相信汶川有更美好的未来。 Wenchuan used to be an unknown small city, which is 159 kilometres away from Chengdu. It was at about 2:30 pm on May 12, 2008 that a strong earthquake struck Wenchuan. So many houses fell down that thousands of

　　people became homeless. Some teachers and parents lost their lives in order to save the children. However, the whole nation was concerned about Wenchuan, so they sent rescue workers. Generally, people believed/believe that Wenchuan would/will have a great future.

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