英文写作常见错误(2)

　　9.　书写难以辨认信息不正确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantage able.尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。

　　10.　介词多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。

　　11.　跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与文章的主题无关。

　　12.　陈词滥调It is okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。

　　13.　标点问题I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。

　　14.　重复冗余Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。