中考英语作文及范文

时间：2017-04-08 08:27:31 思晴925由分享

　　在中考英语中，作文是需要考生重点复习的。今天，学习啦小编为大家整理了中考英语作文及范文，欢迎阅读。

　　中考英语写作概述和指导

　　根据《英语学科教学基本要求与训练》，要求中学生能对人物、事件、物件和场所等作简单的描述和议论，内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词。并且能填写表格，能写简单的便条、信件和日记。英语写作是体现学生英语水平和能力的重要表现形式

　　综观近年中考的书面表达题目，一般有三种体裁，分别是记叙文、说明文、应用文(写信、告示、邀请函等)。看图写话是初中英语作文常考的一种形式，随着上海英语教材的多样化，学生的写作能力有了较大的提高，因此中考作文的要求和难度也相应提高。但它是一种情景作文，多数是以记一次活动或一件事为主。也有其他可能。考生一定要认真审题，理解图意，注意提示的图片内容或提示词，分清体裁，准确地进行描述。

　　怎样才能写出好文章?我觉得我们应从文章的取材、文章的结构与布局以及语言表达等几个方面考虑。

　　下笔前，要认真审题，仔细阅读前面的中文提示以确定文章的主题和体裁。写作时，要切记“凤头、猪肚、豹尾”的要领。要想写好中考作文要做到：第一，审题要准，然后，定文体、定人称、定中心句，切不可丢三落四。第二，根据已经确定的要点，先写什么，后写什么，需要用哪些单词、词组、句型等，都要心中有数。动笔写时，要多用学过的词汇，尽量不出现语法错误，如：名词的单复数、所有格等;句子结构、语序、标点等都要准确无误。第三，要理顺全文，然后再检查一下文章格式是否正确、要点是否齐全、开放式作文还需要再想一想观点是否正确等。最后要保持卷面整洁，还要发挥自己的聪明才智、观察力、想象力和创造力写好句子，这样会增强文章的可读性，使文章具有感染力。这看似简单，但做起来很难，我们要多写多练。

　　中考英语作文类型及范文

　　一、记叙文及范文点评

　　记叙文记人叙事，初中英语记叙文与语文中的记叙文是相通的，耍弄清是写人、写事。初中学生的英语写作处于入门阶段，写人作文只是介绍性的，但要重点突出，用词力求准确贴切，多用简单句，适当使用复合句。

　　写人可以写的方面很多，如介绍姓名、年龄、职业、兴趣爱好、外貌、特长等，常见的句式如：

　　This is my friend, Mary.

　　She is ... years old.

　　She is a teacher/an artist/a singer...

　　She/He gets up at 6/5 ... /early/late.

　　She/He has sports at school.

　　She/He likes...

　　She/He is strong/fat/slim/kind/thin...

　　She/He looks like...

　　She/He is good at English/maths/Chinese/physics...

　　范文1

　　My Best Friend

　　My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home together. We often help each other and learn from each other in study. We have the same hobby-collecting stamps. She has many nice stamps. She is very proud of them. Sometimes she gives some of them to me. I think she is a very- good girl. We will be good friends forever.

　　点评：这是一篇记人的叙述文。先交代了My Best Friend是谁，接着通过事例交代了为什么“我们是最好的朋友”。最后阐述了主题。

　　范文2

　　My Class Teacher

　　My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years. He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” I think he is a good class teacher.

　　点评：这篇文章取材都是身边熟悉的人，作者也有东西可写，更具有可读性。另外，写人时可以把主语稍作调整，读起来轻松多了。

　　I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is Cherry. Now I am studying in the middle school.1 want to be an actress because I think It is a funny and exciting job...

　　写事一定要交代时间、地点、人物、情节。常用的句型如：

　　It took place/happened…

　　Last/week/year/Monday/Tuesday...

　　One Friday morning..

　　范文3

　　Our Class Meeting

　　Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it. We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meeting actively. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard so as to make our life better and better.

　　点评：这篇文章条理清楚，记叙完整，短短的五句话有简单句，也有复合句，交代了时间、地点、人物、原因、经过、结果等六要素。

　　范文4

　　Hot Springs Let Me Have A Rest

　　We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, "Wow, it is hot!”I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me... So I walked carefully into the spring. One step, two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.

　　点评：要写出生动有趣的事，除了把事情的来龙去脉说清楚，还一定要注意增加文章的细节，这是必不可少的，丰富的细节描写能为你的文章增色不少，使人读起来具有一种身临其境的感觉。

　　二、说明文及范文点评

　　说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的，可以自上而下，自左而右，从里到外，从整体到局部等等。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。

　　常用的句型如：

　　There be...

　　I have got a/an...

　　It is-red/green/colour/round...

　　I like…best.

　　It looks like...

　　I like it very much.

　　I will keep it for ever.

　　范文1

　　Our Language Lab

　　There is a language lab in our school. It's on the third floor. It's big and clean. There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk(操纵台)in it. There are50 headphones(耳机)on the desk. Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy.

　　点评：这篇文章写了“我们的语音室”，按照一定的空间顺序，先写设备，再写功能，让人对语音室的概貌有一个全面，准确的了解。

　　范文2

　　Our Housing Estate

　　There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our Housing estate Rainbow Estate is one of them. You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the garden there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate.

　　三、议论文及范文点评

　　议论文要有自己的观点，要有论证过程，强调观点。常用的句型如：

　　1. 论点

　　Computer is important.

　　We must learn English well.

　　It's very important for us to...

　　In my opinion...

　　2. 论证过程常用一些衔接词可使文章读起来流畅，紧凑。如：

　　Firstly...Secondly…，Lastly ... Above all等

　　3.结尾强调观点，最好用不同的句型来表达相同的观点，如：

　　So we must...

　　So it's very important for us to...

　　I believe...

　　We should...

　　范文1

　　Why Are Trees Important?

　　Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you.

　　Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. That's important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful.

　　Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them.

　　点评：文章先阐明论点，接着论证，最后重申自己的观点。

　　范文2

　　It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment

　　It's our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it. Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

　　点评：作者多用学过的词语不但保证了正确，还巩固了所学的知识，并且注意句型的多样化，如长句，短句，疑问句，使用了“if，so, now, but”等词，整篇文章读起来朗朗上口。实际上，写文章就像串珠子，连接词就在于把一个个单词串起来。

　　四、应用文及范文点评

　　要了解掌握各种应用文的文体、格式、各种文体的常用语句。写信时，发信人的地址和发信日期写在信的右上角。信的左边写称呼，如“Dear+头衔+姓”或“Dear+名"Dear Tom, Dear Mr. White…

　　信的正文一般分为几个段落，结尾另起一行，写With best wishes! 信的结束语一般用Yours, Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully...

　　日期写法有月，日，年或日，月，年如2005年5月18日，May. 18, 2005 18 May, 2005

　　写信常用的句子开头有：

　　I haven't heard from you for a long time...

　　How's everything going with you?

　　I'm now writing to you. /I miss you so much.

　　Thank you for your letter.

　　I have received your letter.

　　结尾有：

　　I hope I can see you soon.

　　Give my best/warmest regards to..

　　I'll write to you soon.

　　初中写信题目多为提供情景写信，如2000年中考题目(根据所给情景写封回信，至少50个单词，要求内容切题，意思连贯。)

　　Situation: Aihua's aunt is now in Australia. She went there ten years ago. In her letter she wants very much to know what Shanghai is like now.

　　又如2004年某省中考题目：根据美国朋友Bob来信的内容写一篇英文回信。

　　范文1

　　Dear friend,

　　Hello, I'm your new friend. My name is Bob. I'm fifteen. I'm American. I live in New York.

　　I am a middle school student. I'm good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together.

　　After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the

　　Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope l will visit your country one day.

　　Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours,

　　Bob

　　点评：仔细审题，了解Bob想知道你哪方面的情况，要有针对性地回信，注意写回信的格式。

　　范文2

　　Dear Bob,

　　Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in…

　　I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?

　　Please write to me soon.

　　Yours

　　Peter Zhang

　　点评：回信语言简洁，明了，句子间的衔接自然，紧凑，文中作者把自己的情况大致向美国朋友作了介绍，达到了写回信的目的。

　　假如你陪你校的外籍教师Smith先生去音乐厅听音乐，在门口的布告栏里看见一张观众须知，内容如下：

　　观众须知

　　1.一人一票，凭票入场;

　　2.场内严禁吸烟;

　　3.食品和饮料请勿带进场内;

　　4.演出时请勿照相;

　　5.演出时请勿使用传呼机和移动电话;

　　6.提前30分钟入场。

　　Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告栏里写着什么。现在，请你把观众须知的内容用英语告诉Smith先生，并把要讲的话写下来。

　　范文3

　　Mr. Smith, it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. Entrance to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket. As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either. Please don't bring your digital camera with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more, beepers and mobile phones must be off during the concert.

　　点评：文章的用词和句式有一定的难度，特别是关联词的运用，如of course, as a rule, and what is more使文章读起来朗朗上口，层层紧扣，环环递进，体现了作者较高的写作技巧和水平。

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