揭秘：雅思写作拿到7分以上的5大技巧
对于不少考生来说，雅思写作写来写去始终无法突破6分，达到7分以上。而突破这一瓶颈拿到高分，其实也并不复杂。下面小编就给大家分享一下技巧。
揭秘：雅思写作拿到7分以上的5大技巧
瓶颈形成的原因
明确原因对症下药才是解决之道，烤鸭们写作无法突破瓶颈，往往是因为以下2大认知误区作祟：
1、迷恋模板
部分考生很喜欢使用《十天雅思写作》这类东西，当然这种资料也确实有其功效，对于基础特别薄弱，分数要求是6分则请大胆使用。但如果想上6分或7分甚至更高，就不要用那么多的模板，或者挑与自己水平相适应的，不要挑些看起来很高级的，不然不但可能无用甚至产生反作用。
原因很简单，因为使用了不匹配的模板会让雅思考官明确感知到文本语言层次的巨大差异，试想一下如果一篇作文中，每段的开头结尾转折的地方都用些华丽丽的辞藻、文言文、诗句之类的，其他部分却是用最普通易懂的语言，这巨大的反差感，就像你去勾搭了一个大胸妹子，待嘿嘿时候，却是…
2、追求所谓的高级
有些人认为写作要拿高分，一定要用上很多高级词汇，以显示自己的高水准，其实不然。大家可以看看剑桥书后面的考官写的范文，其中并没有所谓的高级词汇，都是一些通俗易懂的，大家都认识的单词。但是为什么那种文章就是好呢?因为那些文章写的很通顺，观点阐述清晰明白，也就是所谓的”文通字顺“。做不到”文通字顺“却追求的都是复杂高级的句式和辞藻，好比爬梯上高楼，但梯子不堪你的重量而碎了，然后就…
突破瓶颈的5大技巧
就像提高中文写作的方法一样，提高英文写作最有效的方法依旧是分析高分范文。分析高分范文是如何进行开头和过度的。通过阅读范文，总结出自己的开头段与中间连接的各种词组、句子结构等等。其实也像是一种模板化，但是不是写书的专家给出的那种简单的模板。
当然考试还是需要一些特别实用的技巧的，以下5点技巧与各位烤鸭分享：
Tip1：不要用你自己都不熟悉的单词，不要制造机会让考官扣你分。
Tip2：小作文多用些模板，以减少时间;大作文请尽量少用模板，如果要用，请用些没那么多人用的模板。
Tip3：外国人喜欢有案例来支持你的论点，所以请多写一些有关你论点的新闻报道或研究数据来作为例子。
Tip4：词汇咱们不求多华丽，只要句子结构和连接词用的出彩些，高分也不是问题。
比如：很多人用for example，for instance来举例，其实你可以用according to the lastest research,或like Prof._x said in University of NewYork：__x… 这些都是很普通却很有说服力的连接词。而书上模板往往让你背的是：for example，on the other hand等等。
通过一些技法可以让文章呈现出特别的气势，比如
普通的写法：
Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.
加工后的句型：
Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.
Tip5：写作是练出来的，所以考前3天请一定要写几篇练练。实在无法用笔写下的时候，就在脑子里过一遍自己熟悉自己的句型，形成一些小文。
雅思大作文范文：富国人民为什么不快乐
People in developing countries are happier than before while people in developed countries are no happier than they used to be. Why? What lesson can you learn from it?
话题好像是问为什么在已开发的富国人民不如以前快乐，而相对的，在开发中的人民却是比以前快乐?又问从这种情形学得什么教训?
Financially speaking, people are supposed to be happier when their incomes exceed expenses, but the reverse seems to be happening to many people in some developed countries. In comparison, people in some developing countries with a much lower measure of per capita income appear to be happier in what they are actually able to buy within their earnings. The message seems clear enough: higher living standards do not necessarily add to happiness but excessive spending can certainly undermine it.
It is hard to tell what does bring happiness when wealth may ironically fail as much as poverty. In countries full of comforts and luxuries, there are chances that people are beginning to count their troubles in the presence of rising living costs. This is very unlike people in developing countries who make positive sense of life by counting blessings and joys. Even in rich countries, life may become more stressful and less enjoyable under the pressure of increasingly higher living standards from time to time. What is worse, job security is already a major concern particularly among less skilled employees who are nervous about impending layoffs. Besides, the reality of financial crisis is spreading from one developed country to another, further complicating the difficult situation and fueling the anger of many less happy people.
People in most developing countries have reasons to feel happier than before, probably because they live their lives forward. Being relatively poor, they are happier in knowing who they really are, then doing what they need to do in order to have what they want. To them happiness is more like a direction for motivation than a place for leisure. Also, they are more capable of recognizing and appreciating what they do have. In short, they feel happier exactly because they do not expect too much happiness. This mentality is different from people in developing countries who have large incomes but also large expenses, often resulting in negative balance sheets.
In sum, the only way to avoid being unhappy in life, whether referring to a developed country or a developing country, is to have happy thoughts about living within their means and having something to hope for. Per capita income can no longer be the only measure for economic happiness, judging from the fact that people in developed countries are not as happy as they used to be. Without any doubt, the lesson about being happy is for an individual as well as for a country to perform a balancing act between incomes and expenses.
雅思写作：职业运动员
写作题目
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
范文
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of “fairness” is not the issue.
While those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.
Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and achievements.
雅思写作范文：传统治贪婪自私
大家好!我说过，只要有难度的作文，我会站出来帮大家的.现看到那么多人遭遇"黑色情人"， 在中国有一种四代同堂的tradition人很多，对长者必须绝对地respect or even obey.家有“家规”，管教特多，最长者最有威信，不是凭能力来定地位，而是由年龄来决定。多大程度上同意或不同意这种题应该说是比较灵活的，下面为其中的一种写作思路给大家参考： 赞成traditions of family and community对付greed n selfishness有招，因为四代同堂，老大掌门，互助友爱，共产同乐，无“私”可捞，无利可贪。However，“旧社会”不能给我们带来更好的生活。我想举个例来说明。在我山区老家，到如今还有个传统：妇女不能与男人同桌而食，只能吃leftovers. s e x ual discrimination(性别歧视) 绝对传统。
In many parts of the world， a traditional concept of family called four generations living together has been handed down for thousands of years. In old times， the eldest man usually dominated others without any challenge amid the overpopulated home. In comparison with modern society， such a place should be an effective habitat to keep greed and selfishness ，which is considered as born nature of humans， away as a consequence of helping each other and sharing property between family members under the supervision of the most influential man. However， over a thousand-year period those female members suffered extremely tough circumstances of s e x ual discrimination: they were in charge of childcare， household chores， farmingtopsoil clearing and planting， you name it. What’s worse， they weren’t allowed to dine with men at the same table-leftovers filled up their bellies. Conversely， in contemporary society， a growing number of females are fighting for more human rights， say， equality to males， and they are gaining ground! How to convince the "fierce female tigers" these traditions are their better destiny? No way!!!A better life can never be expected by only eliminating greed and selfishness. whereas it ought to be defined along with the following qualities: privacy respected， individual development， no s e x ual discrimination and a fair community with equal opportunities. In addition to my viewpoint， an appropriate way of education would probably a sensible solution to minimize the goddamn greed and selfishness in modern society instead of returning to the old society.
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