2020年3月31日托福写作回忆
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2020年3月31日托福写作回忆1
综合写作
话题分类
自然科学
考题回忆
1-总论点
某地一夜之间大量鸟死亡,针对此提出firework theory.
2-阅读部分
1. 放烟花的时间和死亡的时间一样。
2. 尸检后发现死因是impact,猜测是鸟被烟花吓到,冲向建筑物;
3. 死亡鸟类大部分是blackbird。红翅膀黑鸟视力不好死的多。
3-听力部分
1. 有另一个城郊处离烟花很远也返现大量鸟类死亡。
2. Impact 可能是坠落地面的冲击力,或者强风气压造成的。
3. 当地blackbird 最普遍,所以死亡鸟类大多是他们也很正常。
解题思路
此题目重复2013年8月17日的考试;论述清楚文章的总论点,阅读与听力的分论点,尽可能详细阐述听力论证的细节。
参考范文
原创范文
The article discusses the cause of death of birds on the new year’s night: the firework, while the lecture disputes this idea with the following proofs.
First, the writer in the reading passage holds that the time of firework and the death of the blackbird is coincident. However, the professor disagrees with it, because there are abundant of blackbirds in death in the rural areas which are distant from the urban areas.
In addition, in the material, the writer believes that no other evidence shows poisoned or disease. It is the impact from the firework that leads to the death of blackbirds. While in the lecture, the speaker deems that the idea in the passage does not hold the water. There may be other factors leading in the large scale of blackbirds’ death. It is possible that the wind or the air pressure blows them to the ground, when there is someone witnessing they crashed onto the ground, which leading their death.
Finally, it is depicted in the material that the red-winged blackbirds, which takes up most of the dead birds, have bad eye-sight. When they are shocked, they will crash each other, resulting in their death. On the contrary, the professor holds that this is not true. The main reason of death is not the poor eyesight. The reason why the proportion of dead blackbirds are large is that they make up the most part of the birds in local area, and although there are other factors rather than the firework, most of the birds dead are the blackbirds.
2020年3月31日托福写作回忆2
独立写作
话题分类
教育类
题型
三选一
考题回忆
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The university will spend money on dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way?
-providing a room for quiet study;
-building an exercise room;
-providing entertainment place (watch film).
解题思路
此题重复2016年9月25日考试。
论点:赞同学生应该在宿舍设立健身房。
理由一:反对建立自习室,因为图书馆已经给学生提供了学习的场所
理由二:反对建立休闲娱乐场所,因为鼓励学生娱乐,会导致学生忽视学习或者锻炼,从而对学生身心有不良影响。
理由三:体育锻炼对于学生的全面发展很重要。
参考范文
原创范文
As our entire society has gradually come to realize the importance of higher education, more and more corporations and individuals have donated money to their alma maters and other universities. Regarding the use of this newly arrived funding, people seem to hold different opinions. I would strongly advocate that the university should arrange the construction of a new gym in the dormitory with the available funding, instead of the alternate plans for a room of quiet study or an entertainment place, in which students may watch films and play video games.
The reason I am against the construction of study rooms in the dormitory is that the function of such rooms is in conflict with that of the library. The library is a hub of knowledge which is exactly where a university student should be studying in, with its quiet environment, convenient access to books and articles as well as to the Internet, and an atmosphere created by fellow students in which one may enjoy the process of studying. If the school is to construct study rooms in the dormitory, I believe that on one hand, it would be almost impossible to maintain a beneficial order in such a room without any personnel supervision, and that on the other hand, it would encourage students to study in the environment of the dormitory, which is mainly for resting rather than studying. As a result, it would get harder for students to relax in their dormitories because their work and rest are no longer separated as they used to be.
Furthermore, I do not believe that the plan for entertainment would be an effective use of money. While I do favor for duty of the universities to provide amenities for students to enjoy a healthy and balanced life of both study and entertainment, it is clear that extra entertainment facilities in the dormitory are not only unnecessary but also potentially harmful in the long-run. Constructing an entertainment place can be seen as an encouragement of entertainment over studying and exercising, which is not a desirable effect.
Thus, there remains the best option: constructing a gym in the dormitory. Sports are critical for university students' personal development, and a healthy amount of exercise is necessary for students to succeed academically and socially. Opening a gym in the dormitory is a great signal from the school administration that the university encourages students to exercise. A fully equipped gym can prove to be not only an outlet for the stressful academic life but also a source of euphoria for those who enjoy exercising.
All in all, my suggestion to the university is to build exercise rooms in the dormitories to improve the quality of student life.
托福写作议论文模板整理
模板一
A or B
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________. 就理由进行解释_____________________. For instance,____________________ .Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________. 就理由进行解释___________________. For example,_____________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because___________.Although Iagree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.
根据个人经验,性格类型和情感关注,我们发现有些人持有A的想法,而另一些人则倾向于B,从我的角度来看,选择A而不是B更为可取。 列出如下。我倾向于A的主要原因是___________________________。 就理由进行解释_____________________。 例如,____________________。每个人都能看到的另一个原因是____________________________。 就理由进行解释___________________。 例如,______________。我在第一段中支持的论点也具有优势,因为___________。尽管我同意B有两个优点,但我觉得缺点更加明显。 因此,支持A更好的说法是明智之举。
模板二
A or B
将原题复述___________________.When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity of _________is that_______.The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that________.
当面对B的A的决定时,很多人会认为______________________,但是相反,其他人则认为A / B是首要选择,这也是我的意思。 在影响-A / -B的无数因素中,有以下三个明显方面:我之所以_________的主要原因是_______。每个人都可以看到的第二个原因________。此外,当我们 考虑到__________。另一种观点的缺点__________有一些缺点。换句话说,____________重复观点和缩写理由__________________。考虑到所有这些因素,我们可以得出结论________。
3. 标准写法:直接表明立场开门见山
题目:
Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.
企业与政府建立大型官僚机构的可能性一样大,但是官僚机构对企业的损害要大于对政府的损害。
模板:
Contrary to the statement’s premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.
与声明的前提相反,我认为企业建立大型官僚机构的可能性不及政府,因为企业知道它们比政府更容易受到官僚效率低下的损害。 常识和观察力很好地支持了我的立场。
点评:
开门见山式的开头段写法其实是比较标准的一种写法,因为托福的独立写作从题目要求来说本质上就是一篇议论文,而且还是立论文,需要考生自己提出观点然后论述证明。那么在开头段就直接鲜明地亮出观点无疑是很合理的写法,对考官来说也能第一时间就看到你的观点,可以说是对读者比较友好的一种写法。比如上面的这个模板,就是第一句话直接写出了自己对题目的反对立场,并且最后给出了引出下面正式论述的引导句。这种开头段写法虽然不玩花样看似有点平淡甚至BORING,但对于不要求太多文笔更看重论述逻辑的议论文来说确实是比较高效的写法,也很适合新手考生进行模仿学习。
题目:
“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.
随着技术和对某些服务需求的变化,许多工人将失业。 这些人适应这种变化的责任应该属于个人工人,而不是政府或企业。
模板:
As a saying goes, “God helps those help themselves”, which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned, I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.
俗话说,“上帝帮助那些人自助”,在大多数情况下都是如此。 但是,就技术和市场变化造成的大量下岗工人而言,我相信政府和企业当然承担着不可动摇的责任。
点评:
这种写法就比较有创意了,当然大家在写中文作文时肯定也用过,就是开头就先引用个名人名言压一下场面,比如某某曾经说过。。。这样的写法。这种写法对考生的英语积累有一定要求,引用的谚语或者名言既要符合题目场景切题,考生也需要完整记住这句名言而不能自行修改甚至凭空捏造,无论是强行凑名言还是伪造的做法都只会让结果适得其反。当然这种写法能够一定程度上展现出考生的英语素养和积累,可以说是一种比较炫技的写法,大家如果在英语的言语名言方面有不错的积累可以考虑一下这种写法。
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